Monday, January 07, 2008

evaluation.

Ideas and Content:
I really like how in the story the author would start a new chapter and tell about a bunch of things that has happened instead of having its own chapter for each and every thing that happens. It makes the book shorter and faster to read. And I think he has a clear message way to deal with different situations or ways to get over things.

Organization:
I think Running Loose had good pacing. It got kind of low key then something big would happen. It kept you guessing and excited for more! This book leaves you thinking and makes you think throughout this whole story.

Voice:
First of all, I think there are millions of people who connect with Louie. It sends out a good message and leaves you wanting more. It's very honest and opionated but I think that is what makes it so good. It is very lively and fun.

Word Choice:
This book uses words that creates vivid images. It has words that you don't know but it makes the boy sound smart and sophisticated. It really puts you in a teenage mind also because he talks like a teenager and thinks like one.

Sentence Fluency:
The sentence fluency is very easy to read and understand. He writes in a fun way. The sentences really get the point across on what he is trying to say.

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